This is my first attempt at doing the audio. The equipment is sub-par but the mp3 is passable, I will need to move to a room where the clatter of pot lids and the rattle of the dishwasher won’t interrupt me. Standing would be a be a good idea too.
As I’ve read through it I’ve found a few time gaffs in the story and corrected them on the fly. Tell me what you think in the comment section below.