Category Archives: Story Updates

Posts about updates on the latest Samuel Shinpike Stories

Animal Interaction Issues

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It’s difficult writing animal interaction with humans when they don’t talk. Samuel and Lou converse of course, but neither of them talk with the children, which means they must convey their ideas with their actions.  It’s fun but a little difficult to move the story along, especially when the animals are trying to make a point with the humans.  The humans can ask the animals questions, but the animals can only act or react.

Also need to rewrite the “shelter” – was a long-shot initially, then the idea of a camouflaged camper came to mind…

900 WPH, 75% done, 31,424 words.  Hope to exceed my 42,000 word goal.

May 4, 2014

Andrew Perkins

April 26, 2014

Dan and Ciss (their names so far) are back in the giant Wardencliff Tower-like building for another commercial shoot after being picked up at school.  Hoping Schoop isn’t getting into too much trouble after being called in and not getting a customer!

Doing so many things this morning I didn’t write down the WPH or timing, just updated the stats on the right.  Hoping to knock out a couple of more Survivalist Log entries this afternoon after everything else…

Happy Easter!

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Celtic CrossSqueezed in a couple of hours with a couple of interruptions for Easter egg hunting and some diversions for the younger one while our eldest slept in some. Dove back into gradeschool for some inspiration for a conflict. Had to name one of the minor characters and the name of one of the main characters finally surfaced, will now have to go through and replace “the boy” with “Dan”, but may wait until the first draft is finished. “The girl” has a tentative name of “Ciss” (sis), but we’ll see what happens.
About two hours of writing, give or take, at 500 WPH.
26692 / 42000 words. 64% done!

April 20, 2014

Braiding Writing with Mayhem

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My current writing is braided around work, feeding the kids, getting them to do or helping them do their homework, house chores, dog walking and other necessities like sleeping and feeding myself.  Right now writing is a secondary part of my life, a passion instead of what brings food to the table and keeps a roof over my head.  Thoughts of a second income producing “trading time for money” option nudges me, but instead I press on, brown-bagging it and keeping shoes that should be replaced for just a little longer, making small minor trade-offs so I can keep going.

There are days when I think the “story well” has dried up completely; when new ideas don’t arrive at my beckon, other days ideas flood in like our cellar when the sump pump decides to quit.

I’m finding during the mornings I can squeeze out about 500 words, sometimes the evenings allow another 400-500 words between everything else that typically pops up.

My point is: don’t despair if you can’t create a set time to write, write some each day, whenever you can. I picked up the chain again with by getting up one half-hour earlier each day, which allows me approximately 3500 words per week.  To create a novella that puts me at 15 weeks (40,00+ words) or a short novel at 20 weeks (at 70,000 words). Another tactic is to review the next story beat before I go to bed, and once I finish my morning writing to allow my inner-muse/subconscious to mull over what to do.

To summarize:

  • write every day, even if it’s only 30 minutes. Set aside some time
  • review your story beats or what’s going to happen in the next chapter or paragraph by asking yourself “So then what happens?”
  • look at the year in review – “future pacing” as it’s sometimes called. If you write a set amount every day, how many words will you have reached one year from now?

With that, we find Samuel and Lou have gotten closer to Lou’s goal of finding a ham, though Lou has never conversed with his dinner before, and the well laid plans of humans sometimes have unintended consequences.

We’re at 25651 / 42000 words. 61% done on Samuel’s next adventure, though my pomodoro timer is currently fighting off zombies with the help of my daughter and her planting tactics, so I’m not sure what the words per hour are.

April 19, 2014

Andrew Perkins

April 15, 2014

Been away working on other projects and came back to find out what Samuel was up to.  After meeting the Zorphans Samuel once again concedes to Lou’s quest and they look for the source of the scent of meat.

Up early, hoping to squeeze in 30 minutes. Was able to do this, but woke up my lovely bride by leaving the light on… (oops).

23,629 words, 56% done!

Freight Elevator or Fright Elevator?

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The zorphans have been called in to meet with John after being caught out after curfew by the dispatchers.

The rough draft is missing a lot of details, but the gist of it is there. One of them gloms onto the whole scene while the other is still not convinced.

1234 Words Per Hour

18114 / 42000 words. 43% done!

Would you like to read the rough draft? Leave a comment below and I’ll see if I can figure out a way to post it without giving away too much.

March 2, 2014

Samuel and Lou Almost Get a Close Shave

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Wolf drops bratwurst into the pond...Samuel and Lou finally make it into the city, at least part-way.  Zombies are prevalent in this city as well, though the dwellers have taken on a devil may care attitude, as long as they’re protected.

11,536 words, 27% finished.

“Chuck” is missing her cats, who had their own entrance.  She doesn’t miss the skunks her cat’s invited in though…

February 18, 2014

Samuel and Lou Forced to Dine on Crunchy Spiders

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Samuel and Lou have no water, no food, and are walking through crushed shale desolation in the hot sun. Fortunately no sign of those pesky buzzards – at least not in the first draft. 1200+ words today plus 400+ yesterday.

Have a nor’ easter coming in  tonight/tomorrow. Got gas for the cars and the snow thrower, I’ll be writing between raking the snow off the roof and clearing the driveway. Woohoo!

February 12, 2014

The Well Layed Plans of Mice and Badgers

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Samuel and Lou continued their trek and would have gotten farther if human author wasn’t dorking around with the website for half the day.  It looks better, but cheese Louise – what a rat hole!  Samuel and Lou are scowling at me.  Maybe I can do better during the impending snowstorm.

February 11, 2014

Samuel annd Lou meet up with the Buzzards Again

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Samuel Shinpike the badger with two halberds

Original illustration by James_Illus from fiverr.com

Happenstance nets a win for Samuel after Lou shows his true colors, the selfish son of a coyote!  Added 1000+ words in 45 minutes between laundry, dinners, putting kids to bed, reading stories, cleaning the kitchen and stemming the flow from a leaky drain.  Also, trapped one of Vinnie’s former compatriots under the sink as well (a mole of all things in 20 degree weather).  Dropped him outside near the compost (as Vinnie says “We all have to eat, right?”).  No coyotes present to force the laughter from the audience here though – that was in the meadows.

February 10, 2014