Freight Elevator or Fright Elevator?

The zorphans have been called in to meet with John after being caught out after curfew by the dispatchers.

The rough draft is missing a lot of details, but the gist of it is there. One of them gloms onto the whole scene while the other is still not convinced.

1234 Words Per Hour

18114 / 42000 words. 43% done!

Would you like to read the rough draft? Leave a comment below and I’ll see if I can figure out a way to post it without giving away too much.

March 2, 2014